Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Castaway Scene: revised


Jeff Meller
9 Oct 13
503 words




He's trapped.

Five days have passed since the corporate jet crashed and Chuck Nolan, the sole survivor, washed ashore.

At first he was in shock, then exhilarated - a brush with death makes one feel fully alive.  Then he felt grateful, mingled with melancholy - for friends who were dead, for wives and husbands who do not yet know they are widows and widowers, for children who will celebrate Christmas without one parent.

He reconnoitered the island. As far as he can see in every direction he is alone: infinite sea, boundless beach, limitless sky, impenetrable jungle.

Primeval: sounds only from nature - wind in trees, chirrup of insects, waves on sand; light only from sun and moon.

After a week he is sunburned, bearded, grimy, his hair matted with sweat. His pants barely bend at the knees, stiff with sea salt.

For five days he has had nothing to eat but coconut, nothing to drink but coconut milk.

Each day he wakes thinking: “They must be looking for me. Today I will be rescued.” But the sky remains empty, the horizon unbroken.

This morning he says to Wilson, a basketball which serves as his security blanket, “I should try to make a fire to alert searching planes or passing ships.” Wilson does not disagree.

“But how to make a fire?” he wonders. Flint and steel. A bow and spindle. A mirror. He has none of these.

Then he recalls - vaguely - a fire can be started by rubbing two sticks together. Make a groove in one piece of wood and rapidly rub the pointed tip of another piece of wood back and forth. The friction between the two is supposed to create heat.

He shaves a point on different kinds sticks he finds along the beach. Then he makes a groove in other pieces of wood. He tries different rubbing techniques. He breaks many pieces of wood. Nary a hint of heat or smoke.

He has been trying for hours, all day it seems. With each failed attempt frustration increases his anger and despair.

Toward dusk, when he thinks he sees an actual wisp of smoke, his eyes widened in disbelief. He nurses the wisp gently with his breathe, adding coconut coir as tinder. Sweat drips from the end of his nose. Burning coir is the best aroma he ever has smelled. When the smoke sizzles into a small burst of flame, he cheers “Fire.”

He adds more tinder, then palm fronds, then logs. The small flames grow into a bonfire, a celebration of his triumph. Waving a burning frond aloft he exults, “It’s a signal fire.”

And he calls to the burning sparks rising on the heat of the flames into the now dusky sky: “Fireflies go!” They are not trapped like Chuck: “You’re free. You’re free.”

“Look what I have created,” he cries, “I have made fire,” as the indifferent surf foams gently at the shore, as it has over eons when other men have claimed to create fire.


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